Monday, April 28, 2008

Mind traces like the forset (#4)

Under the wide and starry sky,

Dig the grave and let me lie.

Glad did I live and gladly die,

And I laid down with a will.

Rain races,Ripping like wind.

Its restless rage Rattles like Rocks

ripping throughThe air.

the wind is swiffting like the sand blowing as if it was a bad snow storm.

1 comment:

G. Latman said...

In a poem with abcb rhyme scheme, the 2nd and 4th lines of every stanza rhyme. I don't see that here.