Thursday, April 17, 2008

~still i rise* (#5)

from happy to sad still i rise~

from whispering wind to stormy rain still i raise~

i went from easy to being difficult at times still i rise~

i made alot bad mistakes that i regret still rise~

life is like a fire, diffcult to start but easy to put out still i rise~

my life is global warming every season it's somthing diffrent about me still i rise~

the world today act as if everyone is there on enimie but me? i'm my own person still i raise~

my life have changed sense i have met someone special in my life, i clam down i done became a

mother and my whole personality is diffrent don't nobody notice me~

im a well fit mother and i love my childern yea life is more harder then i thought but life goes on

and still i rise~

cause im a strong black woman and can't nothing pull me down. still i rise i rise i

rise i rise i rise~











3 comments:

G. Latman said...

You haven't identified which poetic devices you used and in which lines. I am unable to give you those points if you don't provide the information I have requested.

G. Latman said...

I gave you an extra week to identify which poetic devices you have used and in which lines, but you have failed to do so.

G. Latman said...

You still did not tell me which poetic devices you were using and where.